Shadow Eel

Erm... sorry if you can't read... ^-^' I'm posting these in a hurry.

Here are the words-
With a thunderous boom, the
shadowbred eel burst through the thick
ice, churning the water heavily. A
loud crack echoed through the
freexing air as the lake split, the
waters crashing upward. The icy
torrent roared, surrounding the massive
sea serpent.